Haiku stories

11 years ago

Editor’s Note:  A Haiku is an ancient Japanese form of poetry that usually is written about nature. It is a three line poem, based on syllables, broken up as follows: Line one has 5 syllables, line 2 has 7 syllables, and line three has 5 syllables. The fifth graders in Mrs. Swallow’s and Mrs. Hynick’s classes have turned the Haiku poems into Haiku stories.

Snowsled-kuBy Craig Dow
Fifth-grader, Mill Pond School
Plan a snow sled trip
Clothes, gear all set to go
Hope weather is nice

Sleds are all warmed up
Gassed the sleds, ready to go
Fun trip planned ahead

Great trail in Hodgdon
Meet many sledders on trail
Must be time to eat

Grammie’s Country Inn
What a sight to see ahead
Yummy food to eat

It was a great feast
It’s time to head home again
Wildlife on the trail

We had a great time
Time to get the house warmed up
Fingers are frozen
Hot cocoa so good
It was hot and so yummy
It warmed me right up

Long day of sledding
It was fun, I got tired
I had the best day

DOG-KUby James Hersey
Fifth-grader, Mill Pond School
Small dog in the pound,
Woke up by the sun.
So cute and small and fuzzy.
Running downstairs to him.
Can I take him home?
The dog is not there!!!!

Hold him in my arms.                                                                                     Where could he have gone?
He looks as soft as a cloud.
Everyone is looking now.
It’s a “chew-wa-wa”.                                                                                       Look under the chair!

GPT in the blue car,                                                                                        What if he’s outside?
The drive home took FOREVER.
Don’t worry, he’s not outside.
Will he get car sick?                                                                                        That makes me feel better.

Finally get home.                                                                                            I think I found him!
Welcome to your new hometown.
He’s under the dog blanket!
Come on, let’s go in!
What should we name you?

Give the dog a tour.                                                                                        How about “Brownie”?
Here is a bed for the dog.
He is as brown as a Brownie.
“Good night little dog.”                                                                                   “Brownie” it is then.

FISHING-KUBy Colton Folsom
Fifth-grader, Mill Pond School
Time to go and fish.                                                                                     It is done raining now.
Oh, Oh, didn’t catch a fish yet.
Time to go back out and fish.
Dad tells me fun things.                                                                              Haven’t caught anything yet.

Stand on a big boat,                                                                                   Almost got a fish.
Or maybe stand on a dock.
Know that fish was way too bitty.
Nothing but a stick.                                                                                   Last warm of the day.

Stand in the water.                                                                                    Fishing on the dock.
Big fish—but got off the hook.
Tried to catch a small old fish.
Real close to a fish.                                                                                      Caught one big trout fish.

Try to fish on shore.                                                                                     There’s a nice trout fish.
Still nothing but a big boot.
Caught a fish, let’s take pictures!
Almost got a big fish.                                                                                   Picture has been taken.

Felt a drop on me.                                                                                        That fish is really small,
Time to go in and stay dry.
The fish cost an arm and leg.
Is it done raining yet?                                                                                  Let’s go get some food.

Basketball-KuBy Emma Drew
Fifth-grader, Mill Pond School
She’s thinking in bed,
About the basketball game.
Tossing and turning.

She’s very worried
About the game tomorrow.
What if I mess up?

I’m having bad dreams,
In a game doing badly.
I made the team lose

In the game I scored.
I had drained four 3-pointers
Glad it’s not a dream!

I made an assist,
That put us two points ahead!
But soon it was tied.

I regret scoring,
Because after I tripped.
“Slap,” went my ankle.

The game had to stop.
Grace is laying on the floor.
“Boo-hoo-hoo”, she cried.

Her dad carried her
off the court like a princess.
She then watched the game.
We got in the car
and drove to the hospital.

“Waited forever!”
Grace got an x-ray.
It showed a broken ankle.
It hurt really bad.

She can’t play all year,
So she is the manager.
Grace is very sad.

Although the next year
she led them to tournaments,
Scored the winning point!

As you can see her
ankle is all better now!
She’s a great player!

Horse-kuBy Aidynn Woods
Fifth-grader, Mill Pond School
Walk into the barn
The barn was big and noisy
Horses making noise

Get bridles, saddles
It was hard to carry them
Thing fell off my arm

Get horse from the stall
It’s name is Abe and he’s big
He is very cute

Ready to tack up
All the stuff is on for ride
Go to arena

Ready, climb on horse
Wow, he’s very tall and fat
Time to ride for fun

Yippee! This is fun
Wish I could ride forever
Abe is super fast

Time to get off horse
I am sad, I want to stay
Abe is very sad

Let’s go Abe, come on
He did not want to go, too
See you later, bye

Get all things gathered
Reach up to put stuff away
Then I walk away

Leaving barn sadly
But there is tomorrow, too
More fun tomorrow

Owl-kuby Abigail McAfee
Fifth-grader, Mill Pond School
Owl sits in the tree
He is waiting for rodents
Waiting patiently

Finally a mouse
The small mouse scurries along
Stay still Mr. Owl

Swoop down quietly
Snatch it while it is running
Say goodbye poor little mouse

Owl is happy
As he catches his dinner
His favorite, fresh mouse

“Ha, ha,” the owl says
Owl smirks an evil smirk
Mouse screams frantically

He sits in his nest
Seeing if there are more mice
Nope, no more mice, Mr. Owl

Owl eats his meal
Mrs. Owl is satisfied
Good night, Mr. Owl